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Snow falls on deaf ears,
Like my softly spoken plea.
I fight back my Christmas tears,
As you walk away from me...
The winds snakes into my clothes,
As I drop to my knees.
The emptiness inside me grows.
The tears I cry begin to freeze.
My heart is bleeding on the snow...
To think I’ve wasted all these years,
Keeping a tiny hope aglow
Only to cry these Christmas tears.
Like my softly spoken plea.
I fight back my Christmas tears,
As you walk away from me...
The winds snakes into my clothes,
As I drop to my knees.
The emptiness inside me grows.
The tears I cry begin to freeze.
My heart is bleeding on the snow...
To think I’ve wasted all these years,
Keeping a tiny hope aglow
Only to cry these Christmas tears.
My submission for the Litmas Contest!
Kind of expresses how I'm feeling about someone at the moment. They've made me cry a couple of times in the past few days... *sigh*
Please critique and tell me what I can do better.
Kind of expresses how I'm feeling about someone at the moment. They've made me cry a couple of times in the past few days... *sigh*
Please critique and tell me what I can do better.
© 2005 - 2024 RamiaAnimorphis
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Awww, I love this poem. It's so pretty.
Great job, bestest buddy. ^.^
Great job, bestest buddy. ^.^